Thread:Yellowlighting1996/@comment-252417-20170723073603/@comment-252417-20170723133555

The opening says: The gang was at the clubhouse on a rainy day, Scooby's looking to play but ends up scolded by them which deeply hurts him.

The comma in that sentence shouldn't be there. It could either be a full stop or a semi-colon. But having a comma just doesn't read well, as it sounds like two separate sentences.

The ending when Shaggy says that there are no substitutes for the real Scooby, is correct, because it's adding to it.

You can also look at the differences I made on Dog Gone Scooby, by looking here.