Thread:Howler of the Moon/@comment-27464229-20160610234339

I'm having a little trouble writing down the synopsis for Space Ape at the Cape. After reading what I have typed up so far, it feels like I'm explaining too much. What I am trying to do is make clear which character said what, mention any point/clues that are important to the story, etc. Unfortunately, that may be my current downfall.

Does anyone have any advice on the matter? 