Thread:Raven Genius/@comment-252417-20150518214648/@comment-252417-20150520205949

I don't have a problem with detailed descriptions (like covering what a character looks like and aspects of their personality), but it gets a little to bogged down with "galaxy eyes" and saying someone's personality is like "poisoned honey" (which I'm not sure is even the correct description to Aphrodite). You also removed the detail of Nova being a Cocker Spaniel.